So, how the hell do I promote a book that I wrote without sounding like a douche? By saying as little about it as possible and allowing our fine (and probably incredibly handsome) Alternative Control readers make up their own minds on whether this stuff connects with them or not. I’ll provide this short introduction to give you all a feel for what I attempted to do with this book, and then unleash a few examples. Here we go!
Le Li is a collection of rhyme poetry and a work of psychedelic lyricism. The book acts as a journey and a cycle through a 24 hour period in American suburbia. The poems are divided into two chapters that represent day and night entitled Lemonade Sun and Limeade Moon. From here, you can probably guess that the predominant visual elements of these poems are in fact, lemons and limes. Using these two simple pieces of imagery, I set the book’s structure as a stringent representation of symmetry and contradiction. Basically, every poem in the first chapter has a corresponding sister poem in the second chapter that complements structurally, but expresses an opposing idea or emotional base. Because of the complexity of this arrangement, and rhyming’s limitations on poetic freedom, I was sometimes forced to make very unorthodox phrases and wild metaphors in attempt to express what I wanted. Because of this, the book has a naturally chaotic nature which supports the whole idea that this is supposed to be a psychedelic work, and the fact that poetic nonsense is a pretty important part of that literary world.
I wrote this book purely for self-satisfaction. I gave myself a challenge, and I’m proud that I was able to meet that challenge and complete what could be the most complex thing that I’ve attempted. After a few years of fine-tuning, a lot of headache medicine and pulled hair, Le Li is finally complete and I’m fucking relieved. If you like what you see in the few samples I’ve given, then please, grab a copy! You can get one from me personally, but they’re also available on Amazon.com (!!!).
Jim Clegg is responsible for all the artwork involved in this project, and he did a hell of a job. Make sure that you tell him how awesome he is either in person, or in the comment section below. Thank you!
Fire’s Inquisition: Our Frailty
Sun fell to the trees
Resting in the tops
Tired from the dive
Rain’s relief deprived
Igniting the leaves
Fires in the boughs
Lemons into orbs
Tiny flaming storms
So the rains they then came down
Not from sky but from the roofs
Like an autumn’s sloppy chew
Spills its crumbs unmindfully
Made of fire, acid, juice
To the skin they bred attack
Engulfed in late afternoon
Land and life now fire twins
Sun explodes in sweat
Starry heat sponged out
And becoming pain
Scars and melting stain
We now burn alive
Frail in lemons fried
Boiling to death
Beaten to the bed
All we’ve built to prove
Strength and power’s will
Swept and cleared of spare
Hopefulness or care
So the rapid flames wore crown
Ruling merciless, aloof
Trees and grass to sizzled brew
Ruin’s fruition in spree
Burnt toast and charred cocoa mousse
Mixed with yellow strokes our backs
Tears us down with cracking croon
Whips us bare and flame ridden
Evening bares its wick
Tapping at the sun
Scratching for the red
Underbelly bled
Blood-stained fire fights
Through the lemonade
Aiding sour taste
With a spicy glaze
Pain so dizzying
Whirlwind knives to nerves
As the sparks like bugs they spread
On the body’s bread
All the land is scorched
Bloody lemons lie
Along with the people spent
Starved by devil’s lent
Frailty: the party ends
Misery is yellow dense
Color of a perished life
Taste of elder rot and strife
Frailty: it’s all that’s left
Evening’s regrets red in breath
Sun has skewered the trees in half
On its steady downward path
Frailty: the spirit scalds
Left the mirth of gardens bald
Lemons now of great appeal
We chew but can’t break the peel
Teeth pushed into gums shall break
Blood vessels inside the mouth
So we can’t speak or then make
Hopeful words from burning doubt
Fire’s Inquisition: Our Ferocity
Limes we break apart
Throw them all in heaps
So the fires start
Fueled by green debris
Tall like water grass
Bright like precious stone
Glimmering like glass
The inferno rose
Fires burned throughout the woods
Camps like stars in clear night skies
Waving cloths of shapeless form
From the stones and bark they dance
Testaments of nature’s wrath
Just how destructive it is
Yet we keep confined their space
Gathered round their sporting lines
Flames of green and grace
Smoke of tattered dreams
Decorate the face
With a scarring piece
Though it burns with fierce
Grave agility
We endure and pierce
Our skin with green
Unharmed we remain
Scarred but steady life
Children of the flame
Eating of the scythe
In a festive swell of goods
Meat and drink in massive size
By the light of fire swarm
In an ancient step we prance
Drumming coals in flaming bath
Oral sex with scalding jiz
We are invincible race
Joyous kinds of hungry minds
Blooded now with hell
Mortals we convert
Jumping over bell
Of campfire’s skirt
Swaying lights are eyes
Windows to the fleece
That in fire lies
Death’s disturbing peace
Arms like solar flares
Legs like burning swords
Smoky lime smell of the flames
Makes us feel like lords
Green like magic flicks
Of the leprechaun
Colors us outside the lines
Of the skin we’re drawn
Fire and the melding of
Power and relentless force
Becomes our armored cart
Through the conquering endorsed
As someone who grew up in the 60s and 70s, I must say that I love the phrase “psychedelic lyricism”
seems pretty interesting! Thanks for telling us handsome people about it 🙂 lol
I love the idea of a “limeade moon” and the description: “psychedelic lyricism”!
Fantastic imagery!
Thank you everyone!